Composition Writing

Dear all,

A recap of the composition writing technique being taught:

Always identify and break down the definition of the topic first.

Make use of at least ONE of the pictures.

Introduction techniques 

Sounds

Using sounds helps to captivate the audience as you introduce your story. It gives a sense of mystery that makes the audience want to find out more about your writing.

e.g

"Beep! Beep! Beep!" The constant reverberating of sirens around my neighbourhood made me feel shell-shocked. What could that sound be? I needed to find out the source of the strange sounds.


Conversation 

Conversation helps to introduce characters and gives an indication of the action that is taking place.

e.g

"Quieten down, Hector. You are too loud. We need to be stealthy and careful or you will alert the guards. Remember that we are here to retrieve my worksheet from the classroom if not I will be in deep trouble tomorrow," I whispered to Hector.

Flashback 

An effective way of introducing a story to add suspense but yet clarity for the reader. Making use of an object or an item to invoke past memories so as to retell the incident. With flashbacks, you have to always make reference back to the flashback in your conclusion.

e.g
Introduction
"Donuts for sale! Donuts for sale! Come get them now!" shouted an enthusiastic employee at the donut stall. As I peered at the donuts on sale, waves of memories filled my head and I remembered the birthday surprise I had just two months ago......

Conclusion
I snapped back to reality as I heard the employee asking me if I wanted to get some donuts. I did not realise that I had been staring hard at the donuts for the past fifteen minutes. As I recalled back about the incident, I could not help but smile delightfully. It was indeed a pleasant surprise.

Always remember to elaborate on your ideas.

Who?
What?
When?
Where?
Why?
How?

Invoke feelings out of your characters rather than just describe them. Sometimes, you can showcase the feelings through conversation and actions rather than just simply describing the characters.

Show not Tell

Tell
He was extremely angry with me and proceeded to shout at me.

Show
"Hey you! Why did you have to tell Tom my secret? I actually trusted you!" John bellowed at me as he raised his fists in the air in sheer anger. As his fists came crashing down onto the table with a loud thud, my heart shuddered in fear. I knew I was in trouble.

Sincerely,
Mr Nelson Ong